Tuesday, July 19, 2011

Please read my short random writing and tell me what you think of it, thanks!?

The whip dashed out towards Ellex. He spun in the air avoiding the sudden attack. Quickly he looked back at Adam while in the air and shot his pistol at him several times. The bullets merely missed Adam's head gazing his spiked hair. Once Ellex landed he continued doing jumps off the walls to avoid the sharp point of the whip that continues to hurl towards him. Adam grins and laughs out loud simultaneously as he aggressively swings his whip cutting through furniture in the room making the place flying with chunks of the furniture. Bella runs into the room unaware of the mess that flies in the air. Sharp wood parts from the furniture dash towards Bella, she whips out her sword and cuts the wood into small splinters. Ellex and Adam notice Bella is in the room and Ellex jumps his way to her while dodging the whip. Adam stops going for Ellex and shoots the whip out to Bella. Before the whip could actually penetrate through her, Ellex sees his opportunity and shoots the whip snapping it.

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